[ACE THE TEST] Giải đề IELTS Writing ngày 07/10/2023 

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IELTS Writing task 1

The chart below shows the results of three surveys on absenteeism in a particular European country in the years 2000, 2005 and 2010. The results show the reasons people gave for not going to work.

Bước 1: Lập dàn ý 

Đoạn tổng quan: Trong khi tỷ lệ nghỉ làm do căng thẳng, nhu cầu cá nhân và vấn đề bất ngờ có sự tăng, có sự giảm trong các vấn đề liên quan đến bệnh tật và trách nhiệm gia đình. Mặc dù vậy, bệnh tật vẫn luôn là yếu tố hàng đầu gây vắng mặt khỏi công việc, trong khi căng thẳng vẫn là lý do ít được đề cập nhất, theo ý kiến của người tham gia khảo sát.

Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

Năm 2000, gần dưới 45% người tham gia khảo sát cho biết họ không đi làm vì các vấn đề liên quan đến bệnh tật, và mặc dù sau đó có sự giảm dần từ điểm này, con số vẫn giữ vị trí hàng đầu, kết thúc giai đoạn tại mức 35%.  Sự thay đổi tương tự, nhưng ở mức độ ít hơn, được quan sát ở những người phải đảm nhận trách nhiệm gia đình, tỷ lệ này giảm từ khoảng 27% vào năm 2000 xuống gần 25% năm sau đó, tiếp theo là một giai đoạn ổn định trong 5 năm cho đến năm 2010.

Nhu cầu cá nhân, chẳng hạn như cuộc hẹn, là category duy nhất có sự tăng trưởng ổn định trong gần mỗi giai đoạn 5 năm, tăng gần 10%, từ khoảng 13% lên 23%.  Trong khi đó, tỷ lệ người tham gia khảo sát bị vấn đề bất ngờ ngăn họ không đi làm, bắt đầu ở mức khoảng 8% vào năm 2000, trải qua một giai đoạn tăng lên gần dưới 15%, và sau đó nhìn chung duy trì ở mức này cho đến năm cuối cùng.  Cuối cùng, việc vắng mặt khỏi công việc do căng thẳng luôn được đề cập trong số ít, bắt đầu ở mức cao hơn 5%. Mặc dù số liệu của nó giảm một chút, giảm xuống mức thấp hơn khoảng 4% vào năm 2005, sau đó tăng mạnh và đến năm 2010, đã đạt mức xấp xỉ 12%.

Bước 2: Hoàn thành bài luận

The bar chart gives information about the percentage of people who were absent from work because of five reasons in an unspecified nation in Europe over the course of 10 years from 2000 to 2010. 

Overall, while there were increases in absenteeism rate due to stress, personal needs and unexpected problems, downward trends can be seen in issues related to illnesses and family responsibilities. Despite that, illness was consistently the leading factor responsible for absence from work, whereas stress remained the least stated reason, according to survey respondents. 

In 2000, slightly under 45% of individuals surveyed attributed their not going to work to illness-related issues, and despite recording a progressive drop from this point on, its figure still retained the top position, ending the period at 35%. Similar changes, but to a lesser degree, were observed in workers having to fulfill family responsibilities, whose proportion declined from approximately 27% in 2000 to almost 25% five years later, followed by another five-year period of stability until 2010. 

Personal needs, such as appointments, was the only category which saw a steady growth in almost every 5-year-period, rising by nearly 10%, from roughly 13% to 23% . Meanwhile, the percentage of respondents whose unanticipated problems prevented them from going to work, which started at roughly 8% in 2000, experienced a rise to marginally under 15%, and then generally stayed at this level until the final year.

Finally, being absent from work because of suffering from stress was constantly mentioned in relatively small numbers, beginning at slightly above 5%. Although its data declined slightly, hitting a low of around 4% in 2005, it subsequently rose sharply and by 2010, had reached around 12%. (282 words) 

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Bước 3: Từ vựng

Vocabulary	Meaning in Vietnamese
Absenteeism rate (n)	tỷ lệ vắng mặt
Attribute A to B (v)	gán cho
Unanticipated (adj)	không được dự đoán, không mong đợi
Consistently (adv)	luôn luôn, thường xuyên
The least stated	được đề cập nhất

1. The ___________ at the company increased significantly during the busy season, with many employees taking time off.

• Answer: absenteeism rate

2. She didn’t want to ___________ her success solely to luck; she believed her hard work played a significant role.

• Answer: attribute

3. The sudden and ___________ change in weather caught us by surprise, and we weren’t prepared for it.

• Answer: unanticipated

4. He ___________ arrived at the office at 8:30 AM every day, showing great dedication to his work.

• Answer: consistently

5. Among the listed reasons for missing work, stress was consistently mentioned as ___________.

• Answer: the least state

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IELTS Writing task 2

Some people believe that the newspaper is the best way to learn about news, while others believe that a more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Bước 1: Phân tích đề 

• Từ khoá: Newspaper, the best way, learn about news, a more effective way, through other media.
• Câu hỏi: Đây là dạng câu hỏi yêu cầu bàn luận 2 ý kiến và đưa ra ý kiến cá nhân. Bài luận sẽ khám phá tính hiệu quả của báo giấy như một nguồn thông tin so sánh với các phương tiện thay thế, cuối cùng ủng hộ ý kiến rằng việc tiếp cận tin tức qua phương tiện thay thế, đặc biệt là các nền tảng trực tuyến, là một lựa chọn hợp lý hơn.

Bước 2: Lập kế hoạch cho bài luận

Main Idea of the Essay:

The essay explores the effectiveness of newspapers as a source of information compared to alternative means, ultimately supporting the idea that accessing news through alternative media, particularly online platforms, is more sensible

Thân bài 1

Thân bài 2

Topic Sentence: Newspapers are considered effective means to access news Supporting Ideas: Newspapers have fact-checking and editing processes that ensure content accuracy, enhancing their credibility and trustworthiness. Established newspapers rigorously regulate and censor news content, which protects news consumers from sensitive or violent information. Newspapers offer in-depth analysis and comprehensive news coverage, allowing readers to gain profound insights into events.

Topic Sentence: News consumption through alternative media, such as online platforms, is a more sensible choice.– Supporting Ideas: Concerns about distorted information online are acknowledged, but internet literacy is on the rise, and individuals are becoming more skilled at fact-checking. Newspapers have disadvantages, such as a time-consuming process of editing and distribution, hindering access to updated information. Online platforms, including citizen journalists and open sites, provide real-time news, allowing the public to stay informed instantly. Online media offers a wider range of sensational topics, catering to diverse public interests, adding variety to people’s lives.

Bước 3: Hoàn thành bài luận

Sample Essay 1 (Band 6.0)

Some people think newspapers are important for news, while others say getting news through other ways is better. This essay will look at both ideas, and I agree with the second one.

There are good reasons to think newspapers are a good way to get news. They have professional editors and journalists who make sure the news is accurate before publishing it. This makes news in newspapers trustworthy and less likely to be wrong. Newspapers also control what news gets published, which helps protect readers, especially children, from bad or violent news. Lastly, newspapers often give detailed news stories, so readers can understand the news better.

But I think it’s smarter to get news from other places, like online. People are getting better at checking if news is true or not when they read it online. One problem with newspapers is that they take a long time to print and deliver, so the news can be old. Online news is faster, and citizen journalists and websites often have the latest news. Also, newspapers have to be careful about what they print, while online news has more topics to choose from, like politics, entertainment, and scandals, so it’s more interesting.

In conclusion, while there are good things about newspapers, I think online news is better for getting information.

Sample Essay (Band 8.0)

While one school of thought holds that newspapers are a vital source of information, others think otherwise, saying that accessing news through alternative means ensures greater effectiveness. This essay will closely scrutinize both views before concluding that I agree with the latter. 

Admittedly, there are sound reasons to assert that newspapers are the most effective means through which news can be obtained. Firstly, newspapers have dedicated editorial teams and professional journalists who are responsible for fact-checking, editing, and guaranteeing the accuracy of the content prior to publication. This explains why news items from newspapers acquire a reputation for their credibility and trustworthiness, and as a result there is little likelihood that newspaper readers will encounter misleading information and fake news.

Secondly, established newspapers strictly regulate and censor any pieces of news before they can be published or viewed by the public, which, in turn, protects news consumers, especially children, from information containing elements of sensitivity and violence. Thirdly, newspapers often provide in-depth analysis and comprehensive coverage of news stories. They have the space needed to investigate the issue in great detail, potentially allowing readers to gain a profound insight into the events. 

On the other hand, I am of the opinion that news consumption from other media, and in particular online platforms, would be a more sensible choice. Although there exist some concerns regarding the inevitable possibility of consuming distorted information online, internet literacy is increasing, with readers and viewers trying to hone their critical faculties and fact-checking reports by independent means before accepting and sharing them. Furthermore, one of the greatest disadvantages of newspapers is that they are characterized by a thorough and time-consuming process of editing, printing, and distributing, and therefore it fails to meet the quest for accessing updated information.

By stark contrast, citizen journalists and open online sites are getting the scoop on major stories, thus allowing the public to instantly keep abreast of current affairs. Finally, given rigorous news censorship, newspapers are selective in what can be published, whereas online news consumers can get access to a range of sensational topics, such as politics, showbiz, army, corruption and scandals, all of which would better suit the public taste by adding variety to their life. 

In conclusion, while there are benefits associated with news consumption by means of newspapers, I am of the opinion that online news platforms provide better opportunities for learning about news. 

Bước 4: Từ vựng

Vocabulary	Meaning in Vietnamese
Fact-check	Kiểm tra sự thật
Credibility	Uy tín
Misleading	Dối trá, gây hiểu lầm
Censor	Kiểm duyệt, kiểm soát
News coverage	Sự phủ sóng tin tức
News consumption	Sự tiêu thụ tin tức
Distorted	Bị biến dạng, bị méo mó
Internet literacy	Hiểu biết về internet
Meet the quest for	Đáp ứng nhu cầu
Get the scoop	Bắt đầu có thông tin nhanh về
Keep abreast of	Theo dõi, cập nhật về
Rigorous	Nghiêm ngặt, chặt chẽ
Sensational	Gây chấn động
Inevitable	Không thể tránh khỏi, tất yếu

1. Journalists need to __________ news stories to ensure their accuracy before publication.

• Answer: fact-check

2. The newspaper’s __________ was enhanced when it reported on the major event with depth and detail.

• Answer: news coverage

3. Online platforms have increased __________, as more people are using the internet to access news.

• Answer: Internet literacy

4. The article was __________, with many inaccuracies that misled the readers.

• Answer: distorted

5. It is __________ that news will change and evolve with the times, especially in the digital age.

• Answer: inevitable

6. To __________ of current events, people often rely on news apps on their smartphones.

• Answer: keep abreast of

7. The newspaper decided to __________ certain sensitive information in the article.

• Answer: censor

8. His impressive track record added to his __________ as a reliable source of information.

• Answer: credibility

9. Readers need to develop their __________ to critically assess the information they find online.

• Answer: Internet literacy

10. The investigative team worked with __________ determination to uncover the truth.

• Answer: rigorous

11. To __________ public demand for real-time news, online platforms provide instant updates.

• Answer: meet the quest for

12. The reporter was the first to __________ on the celebrity scandal, providing exclusive details.

• Answer: get the scoop

13. __________ news is a common challenge in the era of digital media.

• Answer: misleading

14. Many people have shifted their __________ from traditional newspapers to online news sources.

• Answer: news consumption

15. The breaking news was so __________ that it made headlines worldwide.

• Answer: sensational

Bước 5: Cấu trúc ngữ pháp

Admittedly, there are sound reasons to assert that newspapers are the most effective means through which news can be obtained.

Cấu trúc through which trong câu này là một cách trình bày trong tiếng Anh để mô tả cách thức hoặc phương pháp mà một điều gì đó được thực hiện hoặc đạt được.

Trong câu này, through which được sử dụng để chỉ rõ cách thức hoặc phương pháp mà bạn có thể nhận thông tin tin tức, và đó chính là sử dụng báo. Nó nhấn mạnh rằng báo là công cụ hoặc phương tiện chính quy để có thể lấy thông tin tin tức một cách hiệu quả.

Combine the following sentences, using “through which” 

1. The  internet is a vast network. People from around the world can communicate through it.
2. The history museum is a nice place. Visitors can travel back in time to learn about the past through this place.

Answer: 

1. The internet is a vast network through which people from around the world can communicate.
2. The history museum is a place through which visitors can travel back in time to learn about the past.

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